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Post by HardKore Comley on Oct 3, 2013 17:43:52 GMT -5
 HardKore Comley:Hello... My name is HardKore Comley, my reign of terror has been that of pure lack lustre. I have lost twice, but yet i still manage to leave broken bodies in my wake. Maybe my purpose is to destroy and hurt people and not to win matches, maybe i should get my bearings correctly reshaped and just continue to dominate... Even if i lose, maybe i should turn it around and try and win matches. But that isn't what i am truly about, i am more focused on hurting people than winning matches. I tend to stick with what i am good at, which is hurting people. So i guess my goal should now be, how can i hurt the next person more than the last... Simple, by doing more vicious things. ----It was clear HardKore Comley was speaking, but there was no sign of him at all. The room is completely pitch black, for all we know... Comley could be there on his own, or the camera man was not able to pick him up----HardKore Comley:I have to face off against Max Cransom, a guy i took out in his match... He was just in the wrong place at the wrong time. Just like everyone is, no one can stop me from doing what i shall please. Not the so called president, nor the owner... It will take a miracle to stop me, not even 'Stone Cold' Steve Austin can stop me... The thing is, i thrive on making sure people know what i am capable of doing. I tend to make sure people realize what they are dealing with. ----HardKore Comley's voice can be heard from the distance, where is he... Or where was he----HardKore Comley:And so we move on to Max Cransom, the next victim to fall at the hands of me. You seem sure of yourself don't you, you seem so sure that your able to beat me. But then again, you could very well beat me... But you won't forget the punishment you will endure, you will realize not to mess with me again the next time. You can act the tough man all you want, i know deep down your scared and afraid of me. You know it will be the end of your existence, your scared because you know what i can achieve. Your downfall will be at my hands, Max Cransom... YOUR DEAD END IS UPON YOU!----Just then it is silent, which means the camera has cut out and the scene fades----___________________________________________________________________ OOC: Sorry about the sucky rp... Been hectic in personal real life world |
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Post by asylum on Oct 3, 2013 21:47:58 GMT -5
We understand that sometimes real life gets in the way. There are certainly some good parts of this. I think with some polishing your ideas can became great roleplays. You just need to focus on grammar, spelling, and punctuation as well as changing up the setting to make them more original.
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