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Post by HardKore Comley on Oct 13, 2013 7:15:42 GMT -5
____________________________________________________________________________________________________ ----The scene opens up to the RWF Arena, inside the ring is a podium... Next to it is an artists canvas holder, with a canvas on it, it has flowers around it and a picture of a tombstone with R.I.P on it... Just then the music of one HardKore Comley's hits the pa systemafter a few seconds HardKore Comley himself walks out on to the stage, fire shooting out from anywhere possible. He walks down the ramp slowly and climbs up the steps and over the top rope, he gets in the center of the ring and raises his hands and throws them back down as flames shoot out from each turnbuckle. He then walks over to the podium and begins to speak as the lights dim down and only a small light is on Comley----HardKore Comley:Before your eyes, you all see what shall be the memorial of Angelique after our match... For you see, I have made a promise. A promise that I would cart her out in an ambulance, I promised I would make leave in a stretcher... And I shall do just that, win or lose I will keep my promise. I always keep my promise, this being no different... You see, in one match here, which she one... She thinks she has what it takes to beat me, she was scared and now all of a sudden she becomes confident... She thinks she is able to actually beat me, which I am glad. I am glad she thinks she can beat me, I do not want someone who doesn't think they can beat me. Because that is how they end up losing, or better yet... Get hurt, she has managed to start calling me names. like Cromley (Crowd start a Cromley chant) You moronic fools, chanting that stupid name doesn't affect me... It makes me stronger, it makes me more vicious in what I want to do. Keep chanting it, because it will only means Angelique's down fall will be far worse. ----Comley looks out in to the crowd, they are still chanting ''Cromley'' he just smirks evilly and carries on speaking----HardKore Comley:You see what you started Angelique, your name calling has brought out the sheep with in these vile cretins. They follow the herd, which they follow you. But not for long though, come Insurrection your time shall be over... You question me as a Monster with in the RWF, you question me as just someone normal who pretends to be something. Well I guess I shall prove to you that I am a real Monster, an unforgiving monster... What I done to your precious Nathan Harris in our debut match and then what I done to the other miserable specimens, that will be nothing to what I do to you... A woman or not, if you step in to this ring. You have to face the consequences for your actions, Believe me Angelique... Your funeral awaits you come Insurrection, the ambulance is waiting for you. Remember this, YOUR DEAD END IS UPON YOU!...----With those final words, HardKore Comley smiles... his music hits once more and the lights go out completely, as they come back on Comley is gone and the camera focuses on the picture of the tombstone as the scene fades out----{Scene Ends}
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Post by billstauk on Oct 16, 2013 7:45:20 GMT -5
Very good piece this bro, I like how you have got this visual side to your rp with the pics and the song but overall I think it was quite entertaining actually but the only downfall I had to say was it should of been longer
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Post by HardKore Comley on Oct 16, 2013 9:24:39 GMT -5
I didn't wan do it longer other wise it would probably been repetitive lol, but cheers man.
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Post by billstauk on Oct 16, 2013 16:44:33 GMT -5
No I'm not saying its bad cause it aint long but more of that ^ I wanted to read good piece bro though good work
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Post by HardKore Comley on Oct 16, 2013 16:46:36 GMT -5
I know what you meant lol, I just generally saying. I don't think I could have gone on longer, maybe I should have but o well lol
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