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Post by xavierserikaz on Aug 31, 2013 16:24:50 GMT -5
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Post by xavierserikaz on Sept 8, 2013 20:39:21 GMT -5
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Post by asylum on Sept 14, 2013 17:00:34 GMT -5
I like how Xavier assumes the fans are familiar with him already which they would be if he is a legend from another fed. That's the way I'm treating Asylum as well. There were some grammatical and spelling issues that are easy to address. I did have a problem with following the first scene in over the barricade. I read it a couple of times and I'm still not sure what that was about.
P.S. If everyone is open to it I think we should give feedback as replies to the rp. That was what we did in UWE and it seemed to be well received. Any thoughts?
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Post by xavierserikaz on Sept 14, 2013 17:21:47 GMT -5
Could make things better overall. I've seen things go both ways with that.
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Post by asylum on Sept 14, 2013 23:57:36 GMT -5
If it's constructive feedback I think it works, but maybe take this to chat.
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Post by Mackison on Sept 15, 2013 11:14:11 GMT -5
I agree, and thats what I was hoping for
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Post by asylum on Oct 3, 2013 20:31:54 GMT -5
I can't imagine that I am the only one who has opinions on these roleplays. Let's hear some of your thoughts, all.
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